After the first critique, I and my group friends designed our construct again. This time we try to think the paragraph as a whole, instead of working on some expressions like exotic embrace 😊 So, that’s why, we made 2 different parts one of them surrounding the other and it makes the overall construct as we want. Also, that black linear elements are coming from the outside and going inside the brown ones and again going out. It was the way that we did the locked in an exotic embrace and nearing the restless phase.
In addition, we designed some spaces which are very close and they can relate with each other with the help of the linear elements.